Can someone help me plz. can someone make my writing flow better. (easier to read) I'm wringing a speech for someone who passed away in my book for school.

We are gathered here today to remember my husband, troy, and celebrate his life.
For those who don’t know me, I’m Rose. Troy was my husband who I loved very much.
As you know my husband troy cheated on me but I forgive him. in this time I got the daughter I always wanted and started to go to church, found a new activity of my own. If it wasn’t for him I wouldn’t get any of these things. Troy was a bold man with a bold opinion about death.

We are all gathered here today to remember my husband, Troy.

We are all gathered here to celebrate his time in the world.

For those of you who dont know who I am, my name is Rose. As you all know, my husband cheated on me. But, I still loved him and he was very dear to me. I'm really grateful to him. So many things I have would not be here without him. My daughter, church, an activity... If it wasn't for him, I would have none of these things.

Troy. He was a bold man, with bold opinions about death.

Thank you all for coming. (optional btw)

Hope this helps!

R.I.P. Troy

i think the best answer would be d allowing 30 seconds between response would give time for what was already said to sink down in your mind.