The writer could best revise the passage to make it stronger by adding a claim about the dangers of travel. adding a thesis to introduce the topic of cows. adding a quotation from Hughes about the events. adding a summary of the details using different words.

When Birds Get the Flu and Cows Go Mad by John Di Consiglio. Hughes and other investigators from the FDA began tracking the cow's parts through Washington, Oregon, and Idaho. For 32 days, they drove along icy roads in the middle of the night. They logged thousands of miles and battled fierce snowstorms. They slept in little motels and ate at truck stops. Some trudged through muddy farms and feed mills. Others picked through carcasses in slaughterhouses. Some pulled bad burgers from grocery store shelves. At night, they talked on the phone and compared the day's results

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the pronoun reference replaces a noun, but you have to make sure there's no room for confusion.

in the first sentence "her" could be referring to shely or to the sister. the answer there is "shelly called her sister and told her about the new baby."

in the second sentence "it" could be referring to the roof or the floor. the answer there is "since the roof leaks on the family room floor, we need to repair the roof."