Paragraphs that have civil and deliberately, tenuous, innocence, protracted

tending to cause harm

what kind of material was the stuffing?

i would say that it is a bad thesis because it doesn't explain what the health risks are. it seems to be a very vague thesis statement. thesis statements need to set up for the entire essay. it needs to give the reasons why people need to stop drinking diet soda.   so, i would say that it is a bad thesis.

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