IF A PEER READS YOUR STORY AND ASK YOU WHERE THE SECOND HALF OF THE STORY TAKES PLACE WHAT SHOULD YOU ADD TO YOUR STORY. Another event after the problem is solve.
another more intereating character.
details that make the character seem more real. details that help readers visualize the setting.

How did rick respond to this conflict

What is an agreement to stop fighting in the cold war?

Which sentence is punctuated correctly?  a.under a microscope; the organisms look a bit like ruffled tennis balls they have armored plates that fit together to make a round shape. b.when the water is disturbed; the organisms respond by glowing this makes swimmers look like floating beams of blue light. c.there is a bay in puerto rico that seems to light up at night; the light comes from tiny organisms in the water. d.the luminescence attracts visitors from around the world people are curious to see; this beautiful otherworldly sight.