This paragraph is an Example of point-by-point writing because A. it provides information about each career using certain criteria

B. it orders details about each career from most to least important

C. it compares two
different careers using one point at a time

D. it describes one career fully before moving onto the next career

Read the following short excerpt of student writing. use your vocabulary and grammar knowledge to determine which suggestions you would make to improve his or her grammar and word choice. i really thought she loved me but i discovered her grave betrayal one afternoon. it was easy to figure out because she accidentally sent a text to me that was meant for him. i was confused by the text because it said, "don't tell mike." i felt insulted that she thought she could get away with this infidelity. at first i felt very angry bitter and hateful but then i felt so hopeless and depressed. i longed for her to call me. i thought if i could just hear her pleasing voice, maybe then i would not be filled with such bitterness. instead of calling her i talked to another friend who is good at listening and feeling my pain. talking with her makes me feel euphoric. i think i may be on the road to recovery.what word would you suggest to replace the underlined word or words in this excerpt? instead of calling her, i talked to another friend who is (good at listening and feeling my pain). talking with her makes me feel euphoric. amorous sentimental empathetic grave

Question serial number: 1162965720-nccj84question category: the title as the main idea 2**it is important to learn about finances. take, for instance, the old rule of saving ten percent of every paycheck. are most people aware that theyshould immediately take that percentage out of their paycheck and put it into savings? balancing your checkbook is another important element ofganar your money. buy a money tracking program and use it to manage your money. another important tip is to speak with a financialplaner and learn about stocks and bonds. come up with a savings plan that includes a 401k, stocks, and bonds. and start young the longer youwait to save, the less compound interest you will accumulate.which is the best title for this paragraph?

Besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can deepak do to strengthen his paper?