Write an essay explaining the importance to keep the promises you make. The essay must have
Include 4 paragraphs developed around a thesis statement
goal of 450-500 words
and please put this in your own words.

Explanation:

“In the novel, Jim Gets Pwned, when Jim finds out that Alicia is assigned to be his lab partner, he begins to worry. After all, they haven’t spoken to each other since the big incident.”

There’s a big problem here: the reader is going to think “Huh? What in the world is ‘the big incident’?” That’s an example of a promise not kept. As an essay writer, you promise your reader that you will introduce things that you present.

Many of my students who make this kind of error protest “but I’m about to tell you!” But you don’t want to leave your reader hanging. You don’t have to describe everything about the subject in question, but at least give the reader something to start with.

In truth, I’ve presented Jim and Alicia too, and I haven’t told you much about them. Is Jim the title character? Perhaps I could have said “the title character” instead of “Jim.” On the other hand, I have told you that Alicia will be Jim’s lab partner, so at least you know something about her.

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