Revise the passage below so that it maintains a formal style and tone throughout. Most fine arts classes, including visual art, music composition, dance, theater,
and ereative writing, feature a peerreview component in which studenta
provide feedback on their classmates' work. Some art teachers maintain that
peer review is a valuable teaching tool that not only helps student artists
relmagine their work but also pushes student critics to develop their taste and
technical vocabulary. The thing that's wrong with this is that sometimes
people give really lame feedback and don't get how to be nice. When that
happens, feelings can be hurt, and the peerreview process can become
unproductive.

sometimes we look at a photo and miss on important information because we don't know all the facts or don't have the complete story behind it. captions give viewers important and relevant information about the photo. most of the time we will look at the photo for a second time after reading the caption under the photo and then find something different or new about it. this visual trip is also known as a loop.

captions differ from descriptions because they're meant to be read by someone else while descriptions contain basic information that will anyone who is working with them.

the father plays a very vital role in the life of the narrator in the story. the father is that person who may be physically absent but is also the one who just existed in the mind or the memory of the narrator. in the mind of the storyteller, his father during the time he was with their family was dutiful, orderly and straightforward. but when the narrator was asked who has always the final say, it would always be the mother. it is because of the father’s departure that made the authority of the mother waive and became questionable. the father’s leaving really made a big impact in his family’s lives. the father never set foot on land and he was more towards the lonely nature because as the story said he never acknowledged the existence of his family after his departure but it is implied to the reader that the reason why the father stayed and rowed nearby to maintain togetherness.