Hello people of I enjoy writing stories, and I had an idea that I should turn dreams I have into stories (editing them obviously cuz I have some weird dreams lol) but how does this sound for just the summary of the story: people with magical powers (specific ones and/or multiple) a young girl and her best friends (boy) with newly found powers are thrown into a magical world. There is a “ga ng” or group of “e vil” magic users. There is a school for all of these people, with dorms/buildings designed for each of the different focuses of magic. (fairies?) member of the e vil ones stole my goldfish and used it in a ritu al, but probably not something to put in the story lma0). He is bad for her, but she is intrigued.
ignore the goldfish part idk why, but that's what happened in the dream lol anyways, does this sound like it could be a good story?

Read the paragraph. theodore roosevelt was the greatest president because as a leader of the progressive party, he brought about much-needed social, political, and economic reform. one of his economic reforms was to break up many large business trusts. by doing so, he took economic power out of the hands of the wealthy and powerful corporations and placed it in the hands of the ordinary people. theodore roosevelt’s reform policies, known as the square deal, to give the average citizen an equal share of opportunities. which sentence is the thesis of this paragraph? theodore roosevelt was the greatest president because as a leader of the progressive party, he brought about much-needed social, political, and economic reforms. one of his economic reforms was to break up many large business trusts. by doing so, he took economic power out of the hands of the people and placed it in the hands of the ordinary people. theodore roosevelt’s reform policies, known as the square deal, to give the average citizen an equal share of opportunities.