Please help, I need this to pass journalism For this assignment, you must conduct an interview and then write a 500–750 word first draft of your news story. you dont need to edit, it doesnt have to be perfect, it just needs to be complete and not express opinion. the lead scentence i wrote was "Attention all metalheads and rock fanatics, popular rock band Silverstien is holding their 20th anniversary concert at Jannus Live in St. Petersburgh Florida on March 3rd!"

Which sentence should be revised to include vivid imagery

Bicycle riding should be encouraged, and adding bicycle lanes will increase the number of riders. it is healthier for people to ride than to sit angrily in traffic. it is healthier for everyone to breathe cleaner air. sharing the road can be tricky, but there are things that can be done. so, add the bike lanes and get rolling! which sentence would improve this conclusion? every town should consider adding bicycle lanes, because it is a great idea. organizing safety classes for drivers and cyclists will ensure that everyone knows the rules. do not listen to negative people who complain about anything new. it is true that some people might get injured, but even walking can be dangerous.

Create a purpose statement based on the graphic organizer in "section ii: finding the main point."