Justin wants to improve his introduction. How can he rewrite sentence 6 to provide more detail and imagery? (1) "We're moving where? (2) No way!"
(3) That was my first reaction when my parents announced we were selling our farm and moving to the city. (4) I had lived in the country my entire life.
(5) I wasn't interested in urban traffic, crowded sidewalks, or air pollution. (6) The city wouldn't have any of the cool things the country had to offer.
I told my parents in every way I could think of that the city simply wasn't the place for me.
The traffic, the busyness, and the noises of the city would be nothing compared with the beautiful, amazing, lovely countryside.
Without fields to roam, horses to ride, and streams to fish, what could the city possibly have to offer?
The city wasn't going to be the great place to live that the country had always been