Can somebody help me with this 55 word scary story

Title: The haunted house.

During a summer day, Tom, Luke, Austin, and Jack decided to play football.

The ball landed on the porch of the house haunted by the spirit of a serial killer who locked the people in till they die.

He took it, but a force pulled him inside.

The boys grabbed him and pulled him out.

Explanation:

The story should have a main character or characters, an introduction, a problem, and an ending where the problem is solved. We have to use the same tense when we write and to keep the suspense and fear in a horror story. Also, the title should be catching and related to the plot of the story.

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