Rewrite the thesis statement of “The Joys of an Old Car” to include a plan of development.

So, the original thesis statement of "The Joys of an Old Car" is In fact, my “antique” has opened my eyes to the advantages of owning an old car: economy, reliability, and familiarity and you would like to rewrite it to include a plan of development.

That really depends on what you will be writing about in the rest of the text.

You could write something like:

In fact, my “antique” has opened my eyes to the advantages of owning an old car: economy, which makes it a much more worthwhile investment for me, reliability, because I know I can trust it, and familiarity, because I'm already used to having this car.

so whats the question?