Read this rough draft Alice gets more grown up on her journey through the
Looking-Glass land, like how she does not cry as much
toward the end
Revise this draft to reflect a formal style.
O Alice gets more grown up on her journey through
the Looking-Glass land, because she does not cry
always toward the end
Alice gets more grown up on her journey through
the Looking-Glass land, she does not get all
emotional toward the end
Alice matures on her journey through the Looking-
Glass land; for example, she learns to control her
emotions
Alice matures on her journey through the Looking-
Glass land, and she even does not cry toward the
end