Question 2 of 17 Which argument about setting a curfew for minors would most likely appeal
to an audience of senior citizens?
A. Setting a curfew for minors will force kids to spend more time with
their families.
B. Setting a curfew for minors will shelter teenagers and slow their
development
C. Setting a curfew for minors will make them resent adults and
authority figures.
D. Setting a curfew for minors will reduce the amount of juvenile
crime in the city

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

the switch in narration increases the proximity of the narrator to the main character and the reader can perceive information only through the filter of a single character.