2. What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 6? One half of the animal's brain enters a sleep state, or the other half of
the animal's brain stays alert.
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As one half of the animal's brain enters a sleep state, the other
half stays alert.
One half of the animal's brain enters a sleep state, the other half of
the brain stays alert.
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As one half of the animal's brain enters a sleep state, there is the
other alert half of the animal's brain.

owen made and ideal hero because he had all the gret aspects of a good superhero

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made man, i'll never forget

mine is worth far more

these are hyperbolic statements, i hope it

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