After reading the poem, I get the feeling that Dharker is showing the reader that the people in the poem are exceptionally weak before the water arrives. This is shown in the poem when Dharker uses the simile ’skin cracked like a pod’. This demonstrates to the reader that the people waiting for the water are suffering and their skin is weak because there isn’t enough water to drink. Within the simile, Dharker uses the word ‘cracks’ to show that their skin is broken. This emphasises that the skin is damaged and so it’s made the people weak and frail. Overall this would make the reader feel sympathy for the people almost begging for water.
Plz can you give what went well in this paragraph and an action point (what I can do better at)

samuel gompers was an extremely important person in the american labor movement, being him an employee all his life he devoted himself to fight for the rights of his pairs, he believed they all had the right to have better thing and that they all were working for them but the factory workers were greedy, ambitions and socialist people for him who he didn't have a good concept of.

he gave so many speeches and led so many strikes and protest to fight for equality which he considered employers didn't want to accept, so he had an absolutely negative opinion of them.

well stockyards mean a large yard containing pens and sheds, typically adjacent to a slaughterhouse, in which livestock is kept and sorted. and i'm assuming that by party you   mean a large group of people which does make sense because chicago is a very crowded place much like new york. stockyards tend to take up a lot of room due to needing the area for pens to keep animals in and the fact that stockyards are usually right by slaughterhouse where they process and distribute the product. so its much like a zoo but with some dead animal products close by.

the simple predicate of the sentence is camped.

d. must, like a wh_re, unpack my heart with words