Analyse how the writer uses language and structure to interest and engage the reader. In your answer you should write about:
• language features and techniques
• structural techniques
• the effect on the reader.
Support your views with detailed reference to the text.
Through reading the extract I have found the writer has lised a number of various

What is the problem with the following sentence: cameron, who has an extreme and unreasonable suspicion of other people and their motives, suffers from paranoia which is a psychological disorder characterized by delusions of persecution or grandeur, was absolutely sure that someone was following him even though he was absolutely alone and hadn't seen a car for miles and miles.