DUE TONIGHT! 03.10 Make It Stronger You will revise your narrative with three or more strong verbs. You will also submit a reflection paragraph to discuss the revisions you have made. View the grading rubric for the assessment. Print or save the Weak Verb Finder to help you locate weak verbs in your narrative. Replace three or more weak verbs with strong, vivid ones. Mark your new verbs with a (V). Make other revisions suggested in your Discussion-Based Assessment. Write a reflection paragraph discussing changes you made during the revision process. Explain how you feel each change improved your narrative. Submit your final draft and your reflection paragraph.

All started one day in the house of Cory, his(V) exact description :a super smart guy, he haveblack hair and you know that in each story the good or smart guy have a best friend that isirresponsble, his best friend is Shawn he is the type of guy that don't have a lot of money , is airresponsable guy, but he is a really nice guy, so he go to his best friend house and in his way hesaw a poster of a circus that is going to be today at 6:00pm, he takes the poster and show it toCory, they agree to go. Itwas 5:30pm and they are waiting the circus to start, then they saw themanager of the circus and he is talking on the phone saying that they need that dresses in 15minutes, but he don't have anyone that can go and pickup the dresses, then Cory go and talk tothe manager and say that, he and his best friend can go to pickup the dresses, the manager saysthat the only way that they can go to pickup the dresses is that they need to work for him, bothagree and the manager become their boss, they go to pickup the dresses, they(V) flew awayone block to arrive to the circus but they don't know were they left the dresses, they turn backand saw them on the other street the wind take the dresses away, also the dresses werecompletly ruined. what their are going to do with the dresses?, they are going to tell the truth to

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