Chuckling, Angela looked over her little brother's shopping list of bubble gum, race cars, and a puppy, and laid it aside, then, ignoring Harry's protests, she picked up the real list and headed for the door.
Which revision will correct the punctuation error in the sentence?
O 1. replacing the comma after "puppy" with a semicolon
2. replacing the comma after "aside" with a semicolon
3. replacing the comma after "then" with a semicolon
4. replacing the comma after "protests" with a semicolon
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b

explanation:

if you read the story there are characters like the neighbor, son, wife, and him himself.

i would say that it is a bad thesis because it doesn't explain what the health risks are. it seems to be a very vague thesis statement. thesis statements need to set up for the entire essay. it needs to give the reasons why people need to stop drinking diet soda.   so, i would say that it is a bad thesis.

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franklin attempting to increase tolerance towards native americans was the largest difference betwixt franklin’s "remarks concerning the savages of north america" and rowlandson’s the narrative of the captivity and restoration of mrs. rowlandson. franklin promoted acceptance regarding the beliefs of the native americans. on the other hand, rowlandson’s view towards the native american people was negative.