Is this a good sentence it's about being grateful if it's not good what do you recommend I change or work on My second reason is food there are people out there who don’t even have anything to eat and starving many people don’t even appreciate that they have enough to buy food and they don’t have to be hungry all the time.

My third reason is Shelter I'm lucky that I have a house to live in and there's people who have to sleep outside and I get to sleep in a house that protects me from the weather and gives me security and comfort there's people who take their shelter for granted not everyone gets that luxury.

I would add a bit more like only add two or three sentences and also remember to maybe put transition word (if you want) But overall I think it looks  great :)

Explanation:

wordsworth tends to see nature as 'out there'; a presence which surrounds humans, and contributes to human life, but is different from humans. if you look at a typical wordsworth poem (there was a boy, ye knew him well ye rocks) - wordsworth talks about nature as something that needs to be learned about and understood, nature is different from us.  

if you look at a byron poem (the isles of greece is a good one) - byron looks at nature mainly for what it already means to man. wordsworth will look at a landscape and see the mountains, trees, valleys, and rivers as almost spiritual presences - wordsworth wants to get to know nature.  

byron will look at the same landscape and he will want to know who lives there, what are the villages? are there any farms or mines, is there some history?  

wordsworth looks at nature for what it is; byron is forever asking what it means.  

wordsworth thinks that humans are part of nature; byron thinks that nature is part of being human