Can ya'll help me edit my essay for 7th grade ELA. My topic is girls education Have you ever thought about girls' education in other countries, cities, continents, etc? Everyone deserves an education or at least the chance to learn. Some cases in which girls can't get educations are that some girls have limited education due to strong religious beliefs. Girls are seen as only needed for cooking, cleaning, and taking care of children. It is hard for girls in poverty to get an education.
Why do girls in different places have limited education? Girls in Africa have limited education due to unequal gender norms, child marriage, and early pregnancy in the region severely reduce the likelihood of girls staying in school. Girls in Pakistan have limited education because of the Taliban's heavy religious beliefs. Girls are seen as only good for cooking, cleaning, and caring for children. It wasn’t acceptable for girls to have an education because if the girls learn basic maths, reading, and writing all they were good for was their domestic duties. The Taliban believed women shouldn’t go to school because it was “Unholy”.So, the Taliban started to force girl schools to close and would convince people to side with them.
Since the beginning of time men were treated better than women simply because of gender. Human rights entail women's rights, so for women to be treated differently is confusing.“A right all people are born with is called a human right. Some of the most basic rights are the right to live and the right to believe what one chooses. Many people think that governments should protect the human rights of all their citizens.”What are human rights? Newsela. So why are women excluded from everyone? “Girls with disabilities in West and Central Africa reportedly experience double discrimination in education as a result of negative attitudes towards both girls and disabilities. This often means that girls with disabilities are not allowed to attend a school or face discrimination and violence when they do.” 28 million girls without access to education global partnership. org. Girls with disabilities that are out of their control are denied education or are discriminated against for being in school.
In conclusion, everyone deserves an education. Why should girls be excluded for things such as strong religious beliefs, poverty, or gender-biased rules? Why should anyone be excluded when there are equal rights.

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