Read this sentence: The town hall meeting became very loud wher What is the best way to revise this sentence this sentence to be more specific without changing the meaning

The volume inside the town hall increased greatly.

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explanation: nooobras

the pronoun reference replaces a noun, but you have to make sure there's no room for confusion.

in the first sentence "her" could be referring to shely or to the sister. the answer there is "shelly called her sister and told her about the new baby."

in the second sentence "it" could be referring to the roof or the floor. the answer there is "since the roof leaks on the family room floor, we need to repair the roof."