Which contains a phrase with wordy material that should be deleted or rephrased? A)Seymore was convinced that attending the fall conference would be a big
waste of his time
B)It was an added bonus to learn that after the conference we would each
receive two tickets to a Broadway musical
C)The keynote speaker for the conference has been a gifted performer with
the Manhattan Theatre Club for seven years.
D) Mackenzie enjoyed meeting people and learning new things, so shejumped at the chance to get out of the office for a week.

happy new year to yo!

osaka, a gorgeous place to live, extraordinary sights, and a wonderful place to visit for vacation. watching nature change there it is a lovely experience i would like.

explanation:

i ain't gonna write your whole essay for you at least you have a starter

sorry i ain't gonna do the whole assignment for your class or whatever

to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.