I would appretate it if somebody would correct theses sentences PLZ ! 1. "The image that I get when I think of Jay is when I think of him as a small child, when he could rattle off the names of nearly every species of whale known to man. (Context: A grandfather describes his grandson.)"

2. Only then did I realize how annoyed a cat must have got when it couldn’t catch the mouse, and eventually how happy a cat can get when the mouse dies without it trying. (Context: A mouse dies from fright under a couch while a mom, her son, and their cat try to coax it to come out.) plz some body correct the 2 sentences PLZ and TY!

Answer

2. only then did I realize how annoyed the cat cat must have got when it couldn't catch the mouse, and eventually how happy the cat can get when the mouse dies.

Explanation:

1. "The image that I get when I think of my Jay is when I think of him as a child. when he could rattle the nearby whales names. He is well know to man."

a biography is a genre that mainly accounts somebody's life and that is written by somebody else. this genre supports sonia nazario's desire to share enrique's life because she can fully inform readers of his entire emotional journey.

in a biography, an author can share the readers almost everything about a person's life, or just one key event or personal aspect the author is interested in telling, like in this specific case in which sonia nazario is centered in enrique's emotional journey.

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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