Hi can someone pls proof read my essay the prompt is “Which is more important: talent or hard work?”

      In the second row erase "then". In the eight row erase "they".

In the fifteenth row erase the "as" next to "talent".

Okay that's all you need to do because the rest of your essay is amazing. :)

Hi here is what i did :) hope its not to late!!

Explanation:

i think the answer will be theseeeennutttsssss

the narrator is a first person, participant one, who describes in the simple past tense important and difficult events in his earlier life. he also provides temporal markers as the month (january) and the time (12: 30 pm). finally the account of his experience is very detailed, to the extent that a participant narrator would talk the same way about his experiences. a good example of such detail is the mention of the “bovril ration” which historically was a native american food adopted by european explorers in arctic and antarctic regions due to its high level of calories.