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In the movie Life is beautiul Guido's wile dora decided to go to the concentration
camp along with Guido and their son Joshua even though she did not have o go, she still
decided to go with themat first the German soldiers did notwant to let her buthen itseemed
like he didn'treally care anyways. Yes I do agree with her decision, because she did for
love fr Guido and her son Joshua she also obviously didn't want to be left alone either not
knowing where they are going. Away I would do his would be under the circumstances of
my mom by any chance getdeported I would go with her but then atthe same time I don't
really know because Iknow she would want me b stay and finish my school and Iwould
wantto achieve thatgoal so I could not only make her happy but my self by achieving the
goalive always wanted. But then it would be hard for me to leave her and notknowing if
would ever see her again.

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