Please help me with this letter!

Ok, so this is what I would have written.

Dear JimBobJoeJeff,

Hey, Jimbobjoejeff, I hope you're doing ok i've missed you so much and been kinda homesick.  here in Ulaanbaatar it is SO cold one day it was -4 degrees and one of my roommates almost got frostbite. I usally  have to wear a lot of clothes and big coats. honestly kind of like it here the snow is so beautiful and there's a city that reminds me of a little version of New York. really the only thing that I don't like is the market beacause i have my warm house to go outside. You should really come and visit i really think you would like it.

                                                             Your friend,

                                                                       bob

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i believe being nice to m family is the right thing to do. they are people too and the deserve the same respect i have. they are there for me when i need them. i believe i should always put my family first because that is just how life is suppose to be. i love each and every member of my family and i should respect and act like i do. i believe that being nice to your family makes it easier for them to be nice to you. thats why i believe what i do.

brainliest ! ? ☺