Make a story about "A rainy day" I like you to make the story perfectly and neat give me details where, when, How, what time and date. complete it

A Rainy Day

It was January at 3pm on the 2nd when I was at school, I looked out the window and saw a raindrop from where I was sitting (which was the back of the room. I went to the window and looked up at the sky and say it grey and then I heard a big crash and saw a white streak coming out of the sky with my own very eyes.

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i do not know what the passage is but i can give some examples

1. repetitive phrases may be used to create a emphasizing tone

2. pauses in sentences are used to create a dramatic effect but can also be suspenseful

3. using lots of exclamation marks and loud speech such as words in all caps can be creating a excited or possibly angry tone.

4. using lots of questioning phrases my mean that they are in suspicion of something.

5. using lots of questionable statements or questions can imply of a sneeky or sly tone.