Where should I place the commas

All below. To save space I only put the words around the comma instead of the whole sentence.

Explanation:

1 huge, colorful, and

2 developement,

3Time is, I believe

4running around the house,

5should win, our candidate

6 gracefully, lightly, and daintily

7Charm, another fashion journal

8 may 7 1955,

9 Mr and Mrs. Kwon,

10 November 11 1918, the

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explanation:

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