First, determine which of the following thesis statements are too general for a brief (two- to four page) college level writing assignment. Then narrow the overly general thesis statements using the strategies for narrowing topics discussed above and in Chapter 4 (pp. 100-102).
1. Unfortunately, discrimination exists in many forms in today's society.
2. The demands of my job undermined my relationship with my family.
3. The experience of living in a dorm provides students with opportunities to
develop valuable people skills that will serve them well throughout their lives.
4. Violent storms can have devastating effects on communities.
5. Although it seemed unwise at the time, postponing college was one of the wisest
decisions I ever made.