This is for English can yall tell me if its good plz and they u its about my depression On the outside I'm smiling

With happiness sometimes end with sadness

But Depression is a monster

Depression is running through my head.

With tear and blooded hearts we cry under the mask

Can't you hear my silent screams

I'm crying, but they are silent tears

How could I be so broken

Hiding the hurt, hiding the pain,

Cuz people have been entering in

Since I was born they started leaving with the darkness in my heart

I’m feeling so happy but so alone and scared when I’m by myself

I'm stuck between these walls with the sadness

Do you know a life of loneliness and one filled with pain

Living your life in a straight jacket inside a white padded room with no external sensations

I’m feeling Helpless awareness that all of the parts that make me myself and my feelings

3. revise the following paragraph from a student essay. focus on making the main claim clearer, strengthening the evidence, and addressing problems with plagiarism. you may choose to use portions of the paragraph as they are written. underline any phrases or sentences that you copy from the original paragraph. then use bold font to highlight any sentences you added to the paragraph. (15 points) student paragraph: eating healthy foods is a really cool thing to do for your body. healthy food can actually slow down the aging process. foods that are high in anti-oxidants and omega-3 fatty acids protect cells and the cells live longer (p. 20 -- olivia anderson, a natural foods chef). living longer lets you do more. ian jones on pg. 15: "people in their 80s give more back to their communities than those who died in their 60s ever did." healthy food means a long good life. and living longer is awesome!

Which sentence best describes the biased way the author approaches this topic? boars = bacon. and gammon, chops, sausages and feel your salivary glands begin to tingle at the thought of your teeth sinking into that first tender mouthful, and you will be half way towards a sensible attitude towards these creatures. they’re pigs. porkers, hogs, swine, if you will. they dig up people’s gardens, occasionally attack their dogs, spread disease and generally cause a nuisance. in culinary terms, they’re no different to cows or sheep or any of the other feeble-minded, four-legged frolickers which, in various pasties, pies and other assorted pastry cases, end up on our steaming plates on a daily basis. low in fat but high in deliciousness, by eating a wild boar you aren’t depriving poor little peppa and george of a long-lost cousin, but rather reaffirming your god-given position at the top of the food chain. if a boar could eat you it would, thus i say we should return the favour with interest. so say no to the misty-eyed squealers and man up, tuck in and pig out!

What did cherry mean when she said, “things are rough all over” ? the outsiders