Can someone proofread my poem and make sure its good, please? The fresh smell of the air, and
the blissful green wooded hills,
if you keep standing there
you might get a peek
at a bird as it refills.
Venture out no further
as you may disturb the small deer's slumber
instead, admire the skitter
of the tiny little mice
scampering towards their home.

Read these lines from stanza 5 of the poem, “they shot wook kim” and answe the question. hung in the air/over that petroleum morgue that night. what does the use of the phrase “petroleum morgue” best suggest? an atmosphere of chemical detachment an unsettling place of ultimate rest a dark street containing a lifeless body an area containing putrid substances and smells