ASAP can someone please help me with this. Q- improve this paragraph and add linguistic devices and more sophisticated vocabulary

“ we walked down the old to familiar corridors towards my grandmothers room. The route we took must have been walked by us 1000 times. The doctors are nurses knew us by name. As I turn the final term fry destination I saw my mum take a deep breath.

Your essay should be short,just 250 words, and it can be written on any subject. it should contain an example of parallel structure, an example ofevery type of phrase and clause outlined in this lesson, an example of two independent clauses connected by asemicolon, and an example of a colon. if you are struggling to come up with an idea for an essay, consider writing itabout the themes present in one of the texts you have read already.

When doing a close reading, what is involved in the process of annotating a text?

This passage from chapter 4 of story of my life is an example of which story of plot