Writing class -_- My face is like when will this end ..
ANYWAYS!
Somebody help me write a paragraph about "A favorite vacation"

This weekend we went to Europe and saw the beautiful monuments, art, food, and people. It was fun and very educational since we had tour guide so even tho we were away from school I still got to learn something new. I wasn't ready to leave just yet. I still had one place left to visit with my family THE EIFFEL TOWER it was so pretty but very high up. I didn't care though since it was a once and a life time experience.

Explanation:

p.s this may be true next year for me because I take french class and the school lets every French/Spanish student from any grade go to Paris which I can't wait for but we had to wait ti'll next years since Cov-id decided to crawl out of her hole and join us this year.

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

what are your options ?

i would say years or cherry blossoms