write a brief review of your presentation according to the comments that you received from your audience. Explain what they said you were doing well, and what you could improve upon.

its easy. You have to tell what good things the audience said about you and you want to review the comments from the audience and you then would have to put what you think you should improve on. It doesn't need to be a paragraph because remember, it said brief so you want to explain a lot but in a small amount. Catching my drift? or no?

Explanation:

It's pretty simple.

the answer:

in the first part of the story running is all that matters to squeaky. running gives her confidence and defines who she is. at the beginning of the story she says that other kids call her mercury because she runs very fast. in the text she refers to herself as "miss quicksilver".

the line that provides the best evidence that squeaky has self-confidence is

" and i continue with my breathing exercise, strolling down broadway toward the ice cream man on 145th with not a care in the world cause i am miss quicksilver herself".