Today was day three of picketing Harley's Fine Fashions. Still no progress, though - the management refuses to take down the furs
from the main window display. Chet and Angelo made some great new
signs for the protest. One sign says, "The only thing we have to fear is
fur itself." I thought that was pretty clever. The most important thing
that happened today was that the local news came by. They
interviewed me, and I told them we were there to help protect
defenseless animals and why we felt that was important. They said if
they decide to air the story, it would likely be aired tomorrow, but only if
it's a slow news day. I hope it does air - the more exposure a cause
gets, the better.
Which informational update would require revision of this blog post?

The use of the hyphen should be reviewed.

Explanation:

The hyphen is used to join two ideas in a single paragraph. However, the fomra as the hyphen was used in the question aciam, does not promote the fluidity of the text and can generate confusion, especially in the beginning of the paragraph, where the sentences after the hyphen end up contradicting the information given in the first sentence of the paragraph. In addition, the hyphen is not promoting the connection between the beginning of the ceiling and the end. At the end of the text, the information after the hyphen does not appear to be linked to the information before the first hyphen.

anne's craft goods

123 e mason drive, johnson, ms

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to whom may it may concern;

i have recently ordered a product from your online shop. the shipping details read that my order would be delivered by the 8th of december, whereas it was delivered the 13th. i needed the package for a christmas exchange. 

since i paid for overnight shipping, but did not receive the package in the time allotted, i am kindly asking for a refund. the product was just perfect, but i do not believe i should have to pay for a quick shipping if it came late.

you for your time, i hope to hear from you soon.

sincerely,

john smith

fond of fighting is the answer