When writers don’t take care to readers wonder if the writer is . use interesting words, researched well
create dynamic sentences, paying attention
employ commas correctly, tired
correct errors, credible

I'm pretty sure its, correct errors, credible

Explanation:

third person

explanation:

note the usage of names and pronouns, "james" & "the old man". this alone can confirm it as third person, as first person uses "i" and the like, while second person uses "you" and the like.

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