Guys I made a poem for english please tell me your opinion on it so far, I have not finished yet. I sit and ponder at the dark blue sky
How the stars twinkle in midnight
The moon sits up so high
Always shining so bright

A nice breeze shifts the air
There is a little chill here and there
But my eyes continue to stare
The stars seem to flare

The sky is covered with a nice glow
Some shoot to and fro
All the stars put on a show
Each one appears to grow

The moons light starts to fade
As a fog of clouds takes its place
The wind comes to its aid
The clouds leave without a trace

Only if I could be so near
There would be nothing for me to fear
Everything would be so clear
I might even start to tear

The water glistens under the moon
It sings its own little tune
The sounds are always very boon
I think it has its own rune

Even the stars gather around
But the moon seems to be the host
They all enjoy the beautiful sound
But never do they boast

Some of the stars start to fly
Leaving trails of light across the sky
I cannot help but start to cry
It is truly beauty to my eye

They are as bright as they can be
So much I can barely see
They all look so free
I cannot help but to show some glee

As I look out towards North
All my pain starts to ease
I watch the clouds come forth
The night sky is my peace

If only I was at the beach
Oh how much the stars would preach
It all seems out of reach
But nobody would be a creech

The feeling of sand under my feet
That would be such a treat
The ocean smells very sweet
And the stars look perfectly neat

I walk around and my footprints engraves
As my feet enters the oceans edge
The dark blue water always waves
And it tends to give the same pledge

The cool water overlaps
And fills the sands little gaps
Around my foot the water wraps
Mixed in with the shells scraps

Read the passage. northfield is a model city in westport county. crime rates have dropped 28% in the last five years, and new business development has increased by 42% over the same period. there also has been significant growth in public services with the opening of our new northfield community center and the current construction of northfield park. unfortunately, proposition s now threatens to undo all that northfield has accomplished in recent years. proposition s intends to fund public services throughout westport county by taking 8.25% of all tax revenues away from city governments. although most people believe that more public services are needed, proposition s would only burden northfield and other cities with strong local governments and business-friendly policies. these city governments would be required to pay for public services in areas where local politicians have failed to find a way to fund their own projects. given the strength of northfield’s economy, approximately $12.3 million dollars of tax revenue would be redirected toward county projects. without this money in northfield’s budget, many programs at our new community center will have to be cut. this would affect more than 40,000 citizens of northfield, as well as 25,000 people who live outside our city and use the community center on a regular basis. the construction of northfield park, which also would be open to all county residents, would probably have to be put on hold. i am proud to join my fellow residents of northfield in urging all citizens of westport county to vote no on proposition s in the upcoming election. what is good for northfield is good for all of westport county. mr. nelson woo president of the northfield city council which sentence in the letter uses emotional appeal? given the strength of northfield’s economy, approximately $12.3 million dollars of tax revenue would be redirected toward county projects. what is good for northfield is good for all of westport county. crime rates have dropped 28% in the last five years, and new business development has increased by 42% over the same period. proposition s intends to fund public services throughout westport county by taking 8.25% of all tax revenues away from city governments.