Read the email. To: m. blackfrankelem

Subject: have you graded my math test yet? please read, I want to know what grade I received, studied

From: saramymail

Dear Ms. Black,

I’m just checking to see if you’ve had a chance to grade my math test. I studied every day for two weeks and I am eager to find out the grade I received.

Sam

What part of the email needs revision?

the body
the subject line
the salutation
the signature

The Subject Line

Explanation:

The subject line needs revision because the subject should be a one line sentence, and should not include too much detail.

In the sentence ¨...math test yet? please read, I want to know¨ you need the P to be capitalized...¨ Other than that you NEED to edit you topic sentence, ¨have you graded my math test yet? please read, I want to know what grade I received, studied¨ to be shorter and Capitalize every letter in each word in your topic. So a good one for a topic sentence would be, ¨Grading Math Test¨

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