Is what I wrote in the picture make sense?

What is the problem with the following sentence: cameron, who has an extreme and unreasonable suspicion of other people and their motives, suffers from paranoia which is a psychological disorder characterized by delusions of persecution or grandeur, was absolutely sure that someone was following him even though he was absolutely alone and hadn't seen a car for miles and miles.

What are your educational and professional goals and how will this program you achieve your goals?

What is your interpretation of “the story of my experiments with turth”?