Read this sentence, and identify the changes that would make it easier to read. The game was tricky and we were down by one point
when the clock said
the buzzer was about to go off so
Chase made an impossible shot.
Which of the passages below is the clearest and smoothest revision of this sentence?
We were down by one point in a tricky game when Chase made an impossible shot just as the
buzzer was about to go off.
The game was tricky. We were down by one point. The clock said the buzzer was about to go
off. Chase made an impossible shot.
In a tricky game we were down by one point when the clock said the buzzer was about to go
off. Chase made an impossible shot.
The game was tricky, and we were down by one point. Then, when the buzzer was about to
go off, Chase made an impossible shot.

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we would need to be able to read the passage in question to determine which factor allowed david believe he could defeat goliath. post the passage, and i'd love to out.

lennie

is very stupid, big and strong and sweet, he loves soft things

george

is smart reosponible and watches over lennie

candy

candy is an old ranch worker who has lost one of his hands in a farm accident. he's spent the best years of his life working on someone else's ranch, only to lose his hand and have little money.

curly

is the ranch owners son he is said to have vasilene in one glove to keep that hand soft for his wife

crooks

crooks. crooks is a lively, sharp-witted, black stable-hand, who takes his name from his crooked back. like most of the characters in the story, he admits that he is extremely lonely. when lennie visits him in his room, his reaction reveals this fact.

curlys wife

is lonly and seems to flirt with most of the men on the farm she does not like her hunband much.

1. the human rights issue in the novel is equlity the men in the story are poor and curly is mean to all of them as if they are just dirt

2. the first issue comes up when lennie kills the mouse

3. when lennies love for soft things gets in the way and he kills curlys wife as shes running away.

4. the issue is resolved by the death of lennie.

5. lennie suffers because of his death he will never be able to tend the rabbits.

6. the wording in the qoutations imply what is happening in the story

7. when lennies love for soft things gets in the way and he kills curlys wife as shes running away.

8.   the issue is resolved by the death of lennie.