Can you guys tell me if my story is good it's for ELA class, Story:There were two girls one named Maddy, the other named Alex. These girls were best friends, Alex’s parents had invited Maddy and her parents to go for a midnight hiking trip in the woods. 30 minutes in the hike the girls heard strange noises and the adults went to check around the woods. The girls decided to go explore…. Somehow Alex and Maddy have been separated and lost, both trying to find each other, desperate and clueless Maddy and Alex can hear each other but could not see each other because it was so dark, Alex herd noises in the bushes she went to go check it out… Meanwhile Maddy herd noises in the bushes too…. Turns out they ended up in the same place and found each other, Forgetting their parents. The girls heard a loud scream in the far distance, knowing that their parents screaming desperately for help, Maddy was so quick assuming something bad had happened…….. Maddy starts crying on the floor, Alex was so quick to help her best friend she did not notice a voice whispering “Alex come closer”, The voice said this 5 times till Alex herd, She told her friend “ Stay here maddy I’ll be right back” Maddy responded with “ You’re really going to leave me here by myself in the middle of nowhere to rot” Alex said “No, I just do what I want when I want”. Maddy at this point did not even care anymore. Alex left, Alex was gone for about 50 minutes, Maddy was getting concerned so she followed the trail her friend Alex took….. Just to find that this was a whole revenge prank that Alex and her family had planned for months now. Maddy was relieved. The end