I am writing a literally analysis but I am having a little bit of trouble, can someone give me some tips I can include in my essay?

I mean it looks great

Explanation:

I know that that isn't the best feedback for you question but great job!!

avoid using colloquialisms such as "add insult to injury". Instead find a more formal way of describing what you are trying to say. And secondly try to avoid using the word "thing" as much as possible. It doesnt sound very formal.Try finding an alternative word or another way to form that sentence. I hope this helps!

Explanation:

the flighty purpose never is o'ertook / unless the deed go with it"

a) why did you buy only one bunch of bananas ? it's not enough for the party .

b) can i have a carton of juice, ? it looks very fresh !

c) a kilo of milk ? that's 2 pounds, .

d) i've got only one bar of chocolate . you can have a half of it .

e) cut just a small slice of cheese for me . i'm trying to lose weight .

f) do you want a bowl of soup ? it's delicious !

g) can i have a tin of biscuits, ?

h) do you want a loaf of bread ? i bought three .

i) let's buy a glass of wine to celebrate our wedding anniversary !

j) don't leave the jar of honey on the table . the kids will break it .

k) we need to buy some sweets and a bottle of coke .

l) would you like a cup of hot tea ? you've got a cold !

m) can i have a piece of chocolate cake, ? it's my favourite dessert .

n) i bought a beautiful packet of flowers for my mum's birthday .

hope this !