Writing prompt: Write a compare-and-contrast analysis of how culture shapes the heroes in Heart of a Samurai and Black Ships Before Troy. Use transition words in your draft to help clarify relationships of ideas. This is what i have Lacoon tried to warn the Trojans to not bring the wooden horse into Troy, but then he was killed by Athena's sea serpents, and the Trojans thought Athena had killed Lacoon because he had thrown a spear at the wooden horse and said that the horse couldn't be trusted. They thought he had died because he had offended Athena. Culture dramatically affects heroes. First, it affects the way a person or character perceives a certain situation or idea, it affects their point of view on many idea's and topics. Next, It affects how the hero is seen in the story. Third, it affects the way a character will act on an idea or situation.

Lacoon tried to warn the Trojans to not bring the wooden horse into Troy, but then he was killed by Athena's sea serpents, and the Trojans thought Athena had killed Lacoon because he had thrown a spear at the wooden horse and said that the horse couldn't be trusted. They thought he had died because he had offended Athena. Culture dramatically affects heroes. First, it affects the way a person or character perceives a certain situation or idea, it affects their point of view on many idea's and topics. Next, It affects how the hero is seen in the story. Third, it affects the way a character will act on an idea or situation.

repetition is used to emphasize a feeling or idea, create rhythm, and/or develop a sense of urgency.

no its not a run on sentence however i think you meant wet suits not sours also a run on sentence would be like surfers surf all winter long in southern california by using wet sours to keep them warm and the live their all year long