(you have to add sensory detail to the sentence and then right what the sound, smell, and sights are in the new sentence.) 1. Boring Sentence: English class is fun.
Sensory details added:
• Sights: Sounds: • Smells:

English class is really fun. The soft, papery smell of old parchment mixes with the sharp scent of chalk, and the whisper of pages being flipped can be heard during quiet reading. The clock ticks menacingly above the chalkboard, and the bookshelves lining one wall promise endless adventures and knowledge.

Explanation:

I may or may not have an addiction to reading...

I also realized that I just wrote an entire paragraph describing an ELA classroom XD

d.) then bernice winced as marjorie tossed her own hair over her shoulders and began to twist it slowly into two long blond braids until in her cream-colored negligée she looked like a delicate painting of some saxon princess. fascinated, bernice watched the braids grow. heavy and luxurious they were, moving under the supple fingers like restive snakes—and to bernice remained this relic and the curling iron and a to-morrow full of eyes.

ah, shun the horrid gulf! by scylla fly.