A story that ends with we were lucky that night​

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It was dark when I tossed and turned in my bed. I was feeling a little sweaty for the heat of June didn't leave even during the nights. I got up to turn on my fan when I spotted something. From my window I could see a flicker of light across the road. I got closer to the window and opened it to discover that the house across the road from me was on fire.

I was shocked to witness such a sight and so I dashed for the phone. I called 911 and told them about my location so that they could send the fire brigade to the spot. After that I ran to the house on fire. I saw that the car was still in the parking space which meant people were in danger. I was scared at first but I knew it was the right thing and so I broke their dining room window to enter. The upper floor was on fire, so I knew that I could help people on the ground level.

I saw someone hiding passed out in a sofa and so I carried the man outside. Next I heard that someone was yelling  from upstairs. Thankfully the fire fighters got there just in time to help the mother and daughter stuck upstairs.

Indeed, we were lucky that night.

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to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.