I was about to take my regiment's share of coffee, when suddenly I heard a sharp cry of pain. I looked up to see the lieutenant wincing in pain, holding his bloodied arm. He was hit by a sniper. I was stunned, but in a moment I regained my composure and rushed forward to help.

descriptions of what you saw, smelled, heard, and felt as one of the soldiers

your reaction to the lieutenant’s sharp cry of pain

events that followed the lieutenant’s injury

the scene at the field hospital and its effect on you

Here’s an example:

He wouldn’t let us help him, so I followed him to the field hospital.

As the doctor examined him, I was dead sure that amputation was the only option the doctor had to save the lieutenant. That is how it is in the line of fire. A freak bullet takes your life or limb. I am a soldier, yet the tragedy and absurdity of war struck me as sharply as a bullet as I walked through the hospital tents filled with amputees, their eyes staring into their hopeless future.

Explanation:

to me i think class room sitting education is better. i do online school and i have not learned a think haha. when i sit in the classroom i just sit there and kind of pay attention but still i get so far ahead in the class when im doing online i have nothing else better to do but play video games and i sit in school and learn and have friends and just actually learn. when i'm doing online i sit here listing to music and get on and and look up the answers i guess that is my fault for being a cheater. but to be honest i think sitting in the classroom is better.

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