i need to make a thesis for an argumentative essay, my prompt is Why I think parents should encourage their child or children to be creative through their childhood and throughout their school years untill they leave for college. I need to fix my claim, the claim i written down is, I believe this because when a child's parent encourages them to be mpre creative, it can lead them on a path that can help further develop technology like computers or even medicine. They could help develop society socially like making a new theme of music or art, making a new musical instrument. Parents encouraging their child or children can help get them good jobs or jobs that can lead them to fame. This could be achieved if parents encourage their children to be more creative. I have to get this approved by my teacher and she said, That will not work as a thesis, so you need to change it. It is not an arguable claim." i need this done asap because this is already late and I cant start on the research assignment till i get this approved​