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Imre Nagy became the leader of Hungary in, 1953. Nagy opposed the Soviet Union's influence on his country. As a result, he was forced out of office in, 1955. Hungarian protesters in the city of, Budapest, demonstrated against the Soviets in support of Nagy. A period of revolt, and unrest followed. In November, 1956, thousands of Soviet troops, and tanks stormed into Hungary. Thousands of Hungarians fled, or were killed. Nagy was captured, and executed.
A by removing unnecessary commas
B by using correct verb tenses
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