Open the Notebook tool () and read the first draft of your memoir from a different perspective to make it better. Copy the draft and paste it below. Then use the methods outlined here to improve your writing. Add sensory words to your descriptions. Refer to this resource to find suitable sensory words.
Mark the verbs in your sentences. Use a thesaurus to replace weaker verbs with strong, specific verbs.
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Look for sentences where using a simile will strengthen your writing.
Write three new beginning sentences for your memoir and select the best one.

which of the following was specifically permitted by the emancipation proclamation?

free african americans were allowed to fight for the confederacy.

free african americans were allowed to enlist in the union army and navy.

enslaved people in border states were allowed to move to the north.

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the correct answer is c. he speculates on what might happen at given points in the future in a world without people. alan h. weisman is an american author, professor, and journalist. authors organize their information with a purpose. they present their ideas in an organized way. this is called text structure. weisman uses text structure so as to improve overall comprehension and to prove his points.

i believe that the answer is b! i hope i out!

the correct answer is: d